This is Control Tower. All clear for landing.

Pen ink swells on thoughts

pulsating, ready

to expand, go forth

on paper waiting.

All clear for landing!

Reviews

[Zoya]

Haha, wonderful imagery, an amazing short read. Its difficult to have an impact on the readers through such less words, this sure proved to be impactful though.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you zoe :)

[Zoya]

My pleasure

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this I used to write with pen and ink but now use my I phone it's annoying to say the least but love your little poem

[andrew mitchell]

thank you julie for your words

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks Andrew

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"Touchdown brings me 'round again to find" that another poem has successfully been launched by Andrew! Love the metaphor. "Expand, go forth"-yes, many more times my friend. Kudos!

[andrew mitchell]

:):) thank you for your kind words and gracing my page Annette.:)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Thank YOU kind sir!:):):)

[Norman 223]

Or should it be "splashdown", when you're in full flow.?

[andrew mitchell]

it could be norman, just my humour getting in the way of verse lol.

[Chase Dylan]

Stormy weather, I hope not... But a feather landing... Lets hope... My pen is ready... Hah... You always make me smile with the witty and deep metaphors...

[andrew mitchell]

thank you for the compliment silente, from a complex writer as yourself i am happy!

[Einstein Noodle]

it all begins in the mind ...i see my pen...pressed down and waiting for take off ...then i realize it has peed ....into my blob file it goes .. with all the rest ;} very fine metaphor sir ..its a talent not everyone commands
E.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you einstein for the kind words you bestow on me.