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Do you see what I see?

Do you see what I see?

A Poem by andrew mitchell

While you only saw 
what you chose to see,
you only saw me
on what I wanted to show.

© 2017 andrew mitchell



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Touche! Double "Poker-Faces"! Cleverly written and so ironic...two people in a relationship, still hiding from each other...it's all in the perception and the presentation of self. Kudos!



Posted 1 Year Ago


All parties bring what they choose to, to all interactions.
This recalls the song 'Windmills of my mind' to me A.M.

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

classic song that one tony, yes we all show degrees of deception. thank you my friend.

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Added on August 4, 2017
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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I love pushing the limits on writing poetry. Not everyone's cup of tea but maybe a few will enjoy the twists and turns, the simple, the depth of simplicity, the bizarre and the ridiculous. Strindberg.. more..

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