No jacket required, just a tie!

Lust floats in the shallows,

but true love lies

in the swamp deep,

where the titanic

was no more

 but a minnow.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this might be my favorite from you....

last three lines are absolute gems...

each heartache seems bigger than the one before...but love is quite sinkable...we know that.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Jacob.