When shadows turn in the macabre!

The macabre

was no more a

presence of mind

living in the shadows,

dark foreboding

eclipsing the rationality

of common sense

while light was given

shining once more,

a glimmer of hope

as shadows ran

in the safety of the dark

creating hysteria.

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

If the second occurrence of 'while' was replaced by 'as' the flow would be spot on in this poignant piece of 'Poe pie' A.M.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you tony i will change it

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Aaaaaagh! Great imagery and eloquent, sinister words make me think of gothic ruins and wailing spirits- just in time for Halloween too! Macabre is a state of mind not to be trifled with. Great read Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

thank you annette

[Kelly Scheppers]

...is there a chill in here, or what? I like it, Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

thank you kelly