I heard on the hear!

On hearing the noise

I heard the music

that lay beneath.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oooo i like this one a whole lot ..listen for the music amidst the noise ..its what Edith Bunker did all the time when Archie was tawkin' .... :))))))))))))))))) this is of the best sir! love it
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Gene for your kind words🙂

[Tony Jordan]

My two friends (they are cousins of each other so it's probably a hereditary thing) are known in our local pub as 'The Voice' and 'The Noise'.
While neither has dulcet tones worth mentioning they are underneath very nice people - which is a musicality of Life of sorts...I guess.
I could relate to this one A.M.
Hope things are tickety-boo mate?

Oh and I like the use of 'hear' here in the title - it sounded odd in my head but then I tried to recall any similar uses of words and I remember a saying called 'on the wing' - e.g. 'their love was on the wing...'
So fair play is all I can say mate...fair play to your pen.

[andrew mitchell]

Terrific review my friend, always fine maybe too busy and maybe too loud in expressions that disturb me but I like to have it out there!. lol Hope all is well with you Tony, I'm sure it is you are too fine as a bloke!

[andrew mitchell]

David Bowies blackstar influenced this write.

[Tony Jordan]

Aww mate *blushing* - thanks!
I havent had the pleasure of that Bowie track - off to trusty YouTube for a listen!!

[andrew mitchell]

His last album with Maria Schneider if thats correct is a jazz composer who I wished he sought earlier for this album in the blend of influences is just superb as I like both.

[andrew mitchell]

together they would have had great music compliations.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there is always music...some hear it, some don't

i really liked this but i kept wanting to change the "lied" to "lay"---

[andrew mitchell]

yes i will change it thanks jacob.