The horizon of goodbye blues.

The fading hello

diminishing. sinking

sunset in view

the cold of farewell

lingers clouds brooding

grey echoes rains

lightening the final 

strike of goodbye blues.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Love the metaphor use and stormy imagery of your words here. Brief lines as though pain of goodbye is choking off word flow with tears. Great flow, cadence. Perfect!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Annette for your lovely words and visit.

[Coyote Poetry]

A goodbye. Never sweet or wanted. We learn with life and final goodbye. Less goodbyes and more hellos. Powerful use of words my friend. Thank you Andrew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

You are right john and life is like that.thank you my friend for reading and commenting.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.