On time’s itinerary.

On time’s itinerary.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

On the wings of time
I travelled....
forward
with the end
in mind.
Twas no magic carpet ride.

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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very cool Andrew! i love the time play and images conjured in such a surgical and precise poem ...with the end game in sight always ... yet not the goal ...the positive attitude of having spent the journey on wings is wonderful to me! and what a great closing line ...one can believe in magic...and it does happens from time to time ..but overall definitely no Magic carpet ride ..love this poem sir!
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

6 Years Ago

Man Hugs to you Einstein, thank you as always a smile:):)
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

:) ......................

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