Out in the wet!

Stepped into a puddle
turned out to be a pool,
the pool became a lake
inturn became a sea
that turned into an ocean
the ocean became a galaxy
inturn became a universe
I think I’m in heaven?
No! I’m lost in space
trapped in a tear.

Reviews

[Wendy Seames Garner]

So amusing until you get to the final line, then it makes you rethink what you have read. Great job, Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Wendy for reading my other take was to be in a bubble instead of a tear as I wasn't sure myself where i was taking this .:)

[Wendy Seames Garner]

I never know where my fingers will take me when writing. They, Or my computer, have a mind of their own.

[andrew mitchell]

lol that makes writing interesting all the more!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Just cosmically beautiful my friend. The imagery blew me away- one into the other like concentric circles of life. Bravo & Happy Thanksgiving Andrew!:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Annette for your kind words and happy thanksgiving to you too.

[Diane]

Wow! Not a fan of big bodies of water, but I am a fan of your work!

[andrew mitchell]

What a lovely thing to say. Thanks Diane. I shall return the love!

[Diane]

Return the love by writing some more. I really do enjoy reading!

[Gejodi]

So large is life so much to fathom how vast the universe how large the seas the oceans yet you are lost in your grief and your single small tear ! I hear the message good job!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much I shall view your works soon.