Bathing in bodily love set on a heart's spin cycle.

The humidity of lust

hangs on desires

dripping,

the heat of attraction

runs high on the

mind being wet.

For dry is

the heart

that is blanketed.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

strong closing...the blanket instantly jumps into my "scene" ..all woolen and scratchy ...sucking the heart dry ..nice metaphor use ..start to finish .. the alarm goes off and i fold the contents ;)
E.
ps. Norma says I don't know how to fold clothes ... so I never touch her stuff .. she just re-does it if i do :}

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Einstein for your words.