A hit in the midriff changes everything!

A hit in the midriff changes everything!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

When the exclamation mark
took a hit
to the midriff
it became a question.

© 2017 andrew mitchell



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well...i guess it did ... how can stating the obvious be so engrossing and mysterious ... the first time i took a hit like that the exlaimation point came after along with a lot of other scuffling adjectives and punctuations ;))))thanks for keeping it light sir ..such a pleasure
E.

Posted 3 Days Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Days Ago

Thank you so much Einstein
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Gee
Morning young fella.....don't mention the C word.....very clever this Andrew, very.
Hope all is well with you and yours


Posted 3 Days Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Days Ago

And you too Gee, I'm looking forward to the third test!!!
Gee

3 Days Ago

Of course you are , another trophy to put with the won again rugby league world cup.
I think .. read more
andrew mitchell

3 Days Ago

lol.............
Very funny and creative. I guess we all need that jolt to stomach things. LOl

Posted 6 Days Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Days Ago

Thank you kindly Sami
Sami Khalil

3 Days Ago

You are welcome .

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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I love pushing the limits on writing poetry. Not everyone's cup of tea but maybe a few will enjoy the twists and turns, the simple, the depth of simplicity, the bizarre and the ridiculous. Strindberg.. more..

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