A hit in the midriff changes everything!

A hit in the midriff changes everything!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

When the exclamation mark
took a hit
to the midriff
it became a question.

© 2017 andrew mitchell



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well...i guess it did ... how can stating the obvious be so engrossing and mysterious ... the first time i took a hit like that the exlaimation point came after along with a lot of other scuffling adjectives and punctuations ;))))thanks for keeping it light sir ..such a pleasure
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much Einstein
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Gee
Morning young fella.....don't mention the C word.....very clever this Andrew, very.
Hope all is well with you and yours


Posted 11 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

11 Months Ago

And you too Gee, I'm looking forward to the third test!!!
Gee

11 Months Ago

Of course you are , another trophy to put with the won again rugby league world cup.
I think .. read more
andrew mitchell

11 Months Ago

lol.............
Very funny and creative. I guess we all need that jolt to stomach things. LOl

Posted 11 Months Ago


andrew mitchell

11 Months Ago

Thank you kindly Sami
Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

You are welcome .

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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I love pushing the limits on writing poetry. Not everyone's cup of tea but maybe a few will enjoy the twists and turns, the simple, the depth of simplicity, the bizarre and the ridiculous. Strindberg.. more..

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