It was a four wheel drive!

It was a four wheel drive!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

In the end
the wheel of time
runneth him over,
but not before
his wheel of fortune broke
on the highway of life
where his wheel of sanity
ran off the road,
crashed and rusted;
leaving the spokes of his will
exposed for the takings
while the wheel of life
drove by.

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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You die, life goes on.
You make a will.
Life goes on nicely for others.
Maybe I should have wrote the other way round.

Posted 6 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

6 Years Ago

It’s a bit like that Paul, recycling!
Paul Bell

6 Years Ago

Hope that happens to me.
Maybe come back as a sports car.
Superb! So clever with wonderful wordplay. You nailed it Andrew. Bravo!

Posted 6 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

6 Years Ago

Thank you Annette for a splendid review, so kind and generous.😀
Annette Pisano-Higley

6 Years Ago

Who, me? Not I! 🙋‍♀️

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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