Tidal thoughts.

Of tidal thoughts
back and forth
only the strong remain.
The others are
washed out to sea.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and they are not all positive thoughts...seems the most painful ones wash up on shore and do damage.

i love this one....it gave me a really uneasy feeling...i like poetry that punches me in the face.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob

[mou]

sometimes I really hate the tides.it's just another disguiser after human...I can't understand whether it takes me forward or not..but always I just adore your words..and no need to say that it is also not an exception, AM.. :)
mou.

[andrew mitchell]

Why thank you muchly mou

[mou]

:) :) .............

[Einstein Noodle]

seems like mine collect as debris on the shore line ;}
i like the motion in your poem sir ... and i like the cleansing in your closing ..it should be so easy to rid ourselves of unwanted thought ... i am going to try to keep this one in me noodle today ...let that tide sweep it all out to sea ;)
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Haha thanks Einstein

[lightsong]

and may the good ones be always the strongest....

[sette]

and thus the survival of the fittest lives on