In the mix, we are all just plain flour!

In the mix, we are all just plain flour!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

In the case of not knowing,
all rise.
Not you self raising!

Life is all but short
thanks to our inheritance.
You can’t bank on a gene.

Have you reached a verdict?
Yes your wordship!
How do you find mortality?
Guilty!

Will the defendant life please rise.
In the term of your natural life
you will be sentenced to death.

Cases on all life dismissed.

© 2018 andrew mitchell


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You are master of the ‘hit and run’ poem style my friend. Your clever lines force us to think and reason and discover. This poem is filled with skillful word-play and questions asked and answered both drolly and profoundly. Who else could put mortality on trial, find it guilty and sentence it to death?? Only you Andrew. This is a most brilliant and memorable write. Kudos!

Posted 5 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

5 Years Ago

Thank you ever so much for a top review Annette.😀
Annette Pisano-Higley

5 Years Ago

It is well-deserved and you are most welcome Andrew. Hope the Summer is treating you well.:))
andrew mitchell

5 Years Ago

It’s winter cold and frosty Annette lol
I agree my friend. We decide our beginnings and our endings. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

5 Years Ago

Thank you John
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Andrew.
"In the term of your natural life
you will be sentenced to death.

Cases on all life dismissed."

Posted 5 Years Ago


"Life is all but short
thanks to our inheritance.
You can’t bank on a gene.

Have you reached a verdict?"

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very creative and so true. I like how you put things in a great persepctive. Marvelous you sir Mitchell...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. I did not know you are peddling flour. LOl
andrew mitchell

5 Years Ago

Yes my son, I only bake on sundays!
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

Lol.......

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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