Travelling along time’s orbit.

The carousel of mind
revolves around
thoughts encircling
the orbit of memories shining
to be collected
before the eclipse.

Reviews

[angel]

I love this!
The mind as a carousel is a fine analogy.
Personally, I even have music to go along for the ride. There is always a song in my head, sometimes it spills out of my mouth!
Anyroad, this is awesome.
One thing I wonder; is the eclipse sleep, in which case the carousel doesn't stop, but just gets weird, or is it death?

[andrew mitchell]

Yes the same for me always some tune lol.and yes the eclipse is the end of life. Thanks very much for commenting.

[angel]

Yer so welcome, love!