The waves of rhythm in verse sunk.

The seven seas of rhythm

rang out over

the light house passing

as the albatross  shrieked

 " To cry you a song",

drowned in the storm

the dream in a bag collected burst

showering those on starboard

echoing ahoy below the crow's nest.

As hope walked the plank,

sword in its backside,

the flag of skull and bones wavered,

the rocks and waves

treasured their feast,

all thoughts were lost.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

man over board!!!!!!!!!!!!!! drop the life boats!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;) nice one once again sir ... ex-Navy meself i certainly relate and enjoy the nautical ride and really heard that albatross screech in its cry of a song ... danger danger warning warning ... but the dreams burst, scattered and died and the man went down with the ship ... brave Captain? or Ahab perhaps ;))) liked this one a lot my friend!
E.