Cast away your doubts, surrender!

What dwells inside

the stimulated mind?

Well, come inside my dear!

I offer spells of fantasy

that tickle your senses

that you cannot

take no more!

So remove your baggage

 let go of your ties,

relax naked on the bed,

let your senses  do the talking,

if only in moans.

I offer the massage of your thoughts,

to caress your emotions

in a style befitting a queen.

Let me quench your arousal thirst!

Please drink from the goblet

of love poured onto your flesh

as the tempo of ambient music

rises with anticipation,

the candle wick blows gently

as your heart is entered. 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

The best part of your poem is your overwhelming enthusiasm. To be honest, I miss seeing enthusiasm combined with a romantic scene. I get so tired of those who seek love, romance, & sensuality while being overly serious & earnest. Another aspect of your poem that is irresistible -- the idea of being told to surrender & let the other person take care of all the fun & satisfaction. This is what it would feel like to be treated like a queen, instead of being exploited or ravaged. I think I could get used to this! *smile* Fondly, Margie