Love and Hate

My opinion of love and hate.

Love and hate.

Why is this every human’s fate?

Why can’t we just be numb?

Are we simply just too dumb?

Or is the hate and love,

Really better than the one above?

Are all those emotions,

Really better than the oceans?

The oceans so unfeeling.

Maybe we humans are more appealing.

I guess I am happy to hate.

That is after all,

 my love’s gate.

And maybe I am happy to love,

Cause it’s better,

 than any I can think of.

Author's Note

Typos may occur.

Reviews

[Khaled Hishma]

I like it

[Rhianne Ney]

You compared Love and Hate.... w/c are the two strong feelings that everyone will see... I haven't seen any typos so far...
But this is a creative poem... you can still look it over and fix some and use the power of some words ... (:

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AHEM! " 'And if you are in love then you are the lucky one, cause most of us are bitter over someone,' " Sorry I HAD to say that! It just went along! The poem was so well written :D

[TheAdamBryant]

well said

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)

[Steven Cash]

Very nice, Amanda...

as usual :)

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you, as usual :-)

[Steven Cash]

:)

[LuciaMarie]

I like this and how it addresses common thoughts some girls have.

[Amanda J. S.]

Glad you liked it :-)

[green dreams]

cute say

[Amanda J. S.]

Thanks :-)