Out of Order

Out of Order

A Poem by ambur

For once I have run out of allure words;
I am out of commentary to throw your way.
My mind is blank, and my heart is missing,
I can't remember my feelings right now.
What have you done to my mind today?
My mouth is closed, and my soul is shut;
Why can't I conjure up my emotions?

My body, it's currently out of order.

For once I have run out of allure words,
I am out of lies to toss your way.

© 2008 ambur


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I know this place well, unfortunately. I especially love the ending.
100

Posted 2 Years Ago


A very poignant piece because your clearly expressed your emotions with strength and clarity, nice write

Mark-Anthony

Posted 16 Years Ago



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