I can understand

just a sarcastic little snip

I can understand
why you would
be confused
seven years
of un-life
isn't nearly
enough time
for me
to choose
to not
be your
wife

Reviews

[s y e]

Damn girl, a heck of a lot of sarcasm in this one. You packed a punch.

[Lyn Anderson]

yeah I was feeling the snip

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is dripping with sarcasm for me. Another very well written poem.

[Lyn Anderson]

yeah, thanks, I was in the mood.

[Shirlena]

Relationships can be so draining and trying...we women are always waiting and selling ourselves short and if we can't get our feeling out one way we can do it another...like in this write. Get your purge in KL. Perfect!

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh I am purging cause I am thru binging.:)

[Shirlena]

Good for you then...it's your day :).

[Jack...]

Now there's a good slap up side the head. You tell'em KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank ye much sir.

[Madalyn Beck]

Bing! Bang! Boom! You are a bundle of raw attitude! Love it! xo :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Attitude is a must in the current situation.:)

[Frieda P]

The Queen of Sass....haha I love you! ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

I was very hissy when I scratched this out

[Frieda P]

Those are usually the best, they never get censored.

[Caradoc]

Seems like way more than enough. After conversations with others I begin to see things a little differently. Perhaps one day a kind of enlightenment might be mine.

Until then, I will read and heed the experiences of others and hope to use the wisdom they so painfully earned.

Well written.

-Cara

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your kind words. Glad you are back writing with us.

[Caradoc]

You are always welcome. :)