see legs

read it and you will see

lost, she fell into the
hole he left
unattended
collecting the tears
he extruded
from her murmuring heart
she nearly drowned
in surprise
before she found
her see legs again.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Very clever KL, like a combo of the big bad wolf and snappy salt water, succinct sentiment.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. I am working through read requests right now -- still stuck with the mature rating on every one of my poems.:(

[Frieda P]

Why's that? They're not all mature..........

[Lyn Anderson]

I don't know. Every single one is mature, I can't change them, and I have contacted the administration twice. There is no box to alter them on edit.

[Frieda P]

Is that because your entire profile is rated mature also?

[Lyn Anderson]

No, my profile has always been rated mature. I tried changing it just to see if I could eliminate the mature off my non-mature poems, and it does not help.

[Frieda P]

This site has more bloody bugs I swear....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

short sharp...the murmur is heard.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for stopping by.