A handme down gift

A handme down gift

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

inspired by my blanket girl

"
Life is a handme down gift
she said to me --
treasure the moments
of life
we all share
sitting beside
the fire
tonight
in our handme down life.




© 2016 Lyn Anderson



Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
My 7 year old daughter dictated this poem to me. I thought it was pretty good. She picked the image from stock fire images too.

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B.J
Brilliantly said so clever.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

This is my daughter's poem, thank you.
B.J

3 Years Ago

It was beautiful anyway.
She's definitely a poet. Runs in the blood I guess.
She did great, kudos to her. =3

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thanks. Yes. I am pretty proud of her.
Bluefire

3 Years Ago

No problem. ^^
wow this is definitely a keeper then. Well done

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I am very proud of my daughter.
Now that I have discovered the way to delete all those read requests from two people (over 50) I can keep up.

Apologies for being late to find this.

Your daughted is blessed in many ways.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Aww, thanks, I don't send out many read requests, but for my baby I do.
Wow, I can see your daughter is going to be a great writer like you. This was amazing for a 7 year old to write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much
Beautiful poem and deeply warm.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much. My daughter appreciates it.
Elegant and soft poem , good job

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

My daughter appreciates all the reviews
New Theory

3 Years Ago

You are welcome :) and god bless her
A great poem from this talented young lady...Bravo.....................

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I appreciate that.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)......
What a wonderful and endearing write!...

I think your daughter is onto something... we should all cherish "handme downs"..it is indeed a gift...

A fabulous write... A sweet Collaboration, if you will. ~xoxo~:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, she is loving all these reviews.

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