Above the Fray

Above the Fray

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

for Jacob, I dragged you in ...:)

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Above the fray,
you observe ...
                         quietly.

never missing                        
                          a thing.

joining in,
when it suits you,

you are always
                           listening.



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


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ANM
Short and sweet and flows well and from what I have seen very apt!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I think so.
This suits him perfectly.. I think everyone that reads his word or has had any contact with him, loves him to pieces... He is always so wise and observant... well done... I am sure he will love it... ((hugs)) ma'am...

Posted 9 Years Ago


AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Me too ma'am... my grandmother had a stroke yesterday and was air lifted to hospital... (she is stab.. read more
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

I am so sorry to hear that. All we can do is pray and have faith. Thankfully, my troubles are of a d.. read more
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

indeed we can... different sort eh?.. I will pray for you as well.. thank you girl...
What a wonderful dedication to a cool poet and person.
When we sit back and really listen we can truly understand anthers intentions.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you get it. Some people have been taking it in a way I totally wouldn't connect with Ja.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Oh really, well some people forget to read between the lines.
Shh. They are everywhere. They will find you and they will break you. And when you are broken, you will bleed. And when you bleed, you will die. Your death will be slow, agonizing, terrifying. But first, they will stalk you. They will torment you. They will make you go mad. You become something else. Something dark, something afraid. You bend to their will and their will is what will make you break. You will give them what they want to know and you will beg. You won't beg for your life, it's as worthless as counterfeit money. You beg for the lives of your children and your wife. You beg them to leave your family out of it, but in the back of your mind, you know they won't. So you will give them what they want.

But what do they want? By realmwriter 2014 DVD

Dude thank you, This just inspired me for a book and above is the very first paragraph.

I really Like this piece. Big Brother indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

This is actually about Jacob, who is a wonderful writer on this site, who always manages to stay abo.. read more
realmwriter

9 Years Ago

Where do I find him so that I might read some of his works?
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/erin-cilberto
Big Brother is not only watching, but listening as well? :) Is this about Jacob from WC? He is such a talented poet! With all the poetry posted on this site, it is nearly impossible to review it all, but many are always watching and listening, Mandy....never doubt it. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Yes, it is a tribute to him and his impeccable manners. Could say the same for you as well:)
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Mandy.....I try.
Whenever I seem to be looking for something just a little bit different and special, I often find myself considering one or more of KLG's creations and, for what it might be worth, am seldom disappointed. This is just an example of what I mean.... x5 reviews in less than x1 day here is something that seems to support my own opinion.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Aww, thanks. I get more reviews than views some days, isn't that weird? Such a joy to see you, my fr.. read more
very deep and full of pure soul! I loved every word

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Thanks, a small observational piece is all.
Jacob is the epitome of a gentleman but I doubt he misses anything. Its just that he is here to write and write he does (more on here that should follow his example). He does interact...and has, on a few occasions when I have been struggling, given me words of encouragement that I hold dear.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

You got it, both an exemplary of poetic prowess and class, and that's what I am trying to get across.. read more
redflutterby

9 Years Ago

You did it well!!
Taking a bit of a risk this remind me of The Police every brath you take , breath - move - bond - step I'll be watching you. I don't know might as well burn myself here but I think there is something endearing about a non - violen,t non - threatening stalker or is it just me? Probably just me

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

It's interesting that's where you took it. I was in fact admiring dear Jacob's ability to read and w.. read more
Rene Salinas

9 Years Ago

Sighs - I knew it! and this is why people I avoid opening up too much the stuff that comes out of my.. read more
Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Not a worry, I think that is what makes poetry great, that it is transferable to our own experience.
This is so hauntingly beautiful. I am blown away by the beauty and depth of this

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Years Ago

Hmm, well, it really is just a small observational piece.

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Added on August 23, 2014
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