primordial ooze

just a stray thought.

swamp thing --
crawled out of the primordial ooze
and disguised yourself as hominid,
when you hadn't even made it to ape.

Author's Note

this is not a debate on evolution.

Reviews

[NoelHC]

Owwww! That burns. Remind me to stay on your good side.
Vivid image you portrayed here.
Question? What do you have against apes?

[Lyn Anderson]

Nothing. He never made it that far up the evolutionary ladder.:)

[NoelHC]

Ahh I see, just slime sort of accidentally piled up in a vaguely human shape, sort of like seeing images in clouds?

[Madalyn Beck]

Now there's an image! Haha! Love this stray thought here, KL. Truly intriguing! xo :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. Ever have that moment when you looked at your ex and thought, "just why on earth did I ever find him attractive?"

[Madalyn Beck]

Bahaha! Yes, actually. Quite recently. It's amazing how perspective changes with time.

[Frieda P]

Ouch, is that like pond scum?........................you flipped this one the bird.

[Lyn Anderson]

pond scum X infinity.:)

[Frieda P]

Ha I figured as muchly, we speak the same sarcasm. ;)

[Einstein Noodle]

there's monster in us all aaaaaaaaaaaaaargh! sorry .. just glimpsed a mirror :)

i have one titled the same .. too cool! i would love for you to review it .. i think the subject is broad and wide .. nice write KL .. has turned me introspective this morning
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

I surely will. Thanks so much.

[Rene Salinas]

If words could create a gesture what would this gesture be? In my mind either a slap in the face or a kick in he balls either way ouch.

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

It's both, I think:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sooooooooooooooooooo full of sarcastic angry vitriol and said with a swipe of distain lol

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. We all know how you like to point out my vitriol.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay then...wouldn't want to be the person about whom this poem was written....

i just need to get this damn mossy crap off of me...grrrrrrrrrrrrrr!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, I rather liked this little thought.