just push

from my favourite line from "So I married an Axe murderer"

saw you at the bus stop
the other day --
funny how your mind
can play tricks on you.
I could have sworn
you looked 10 years older,
and you've gained a size
or two ...

Have you ever seen someone
standing on the platform and you
wanted to just push?

Author's Note

The punch line is paraphrasing the line from the movie "So I married an Axe murderer"
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Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And I thought I was a homicidal maniac..............you always say simple things in the most articulate fashion.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I guess that is reflective of my straight up manner. Some like it, some don't.

[icelandicblue]

Don't mind the gap! Luckily most of us keep those thoughts in our thought bubbles!

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, well in this case not sure how lucky. :)

[icelandicblue]

It's hard to get computer access in prison. Let karma clean up the mess. ; )

[therisa]

Oh yes, KL, I have a few people, who I would love to do that to. Except, it only happens, in my mind, on those days, I feel the need, to exercise some of my fantasies.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for picking this one. Yes, some days it's better to turn the corner and go home and write it down.

[therisa]

Your welcome, KL.

[Terpsichore]

No, not at all. Just running with your theme of how the mind can play tricks.

T

[Lyn Anderson]

I was teasing of course, thank you.

[ANM]

A push is as good as a shove to a one armed man.... Well written liked it!

[Lyn Anderson]

I see, I will keep that in mind. Thanks.:)

[ANM]

Your welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, okay then....nothing like holding on to some angst..and then letting it go with one big push.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yep. Welcome back and thank you

[NoelHC]

Throw Mama From the Train! Those thoughts often flit through ones mind, don"t they. Well expressed here.

[Lyn Anderson]

Certainly do from time to time thanks

[Bright Ocean Star]

ha-ha! This one is great! What a delightful temptation to tantalize your thoughts! "Just say 'No'!" Great writing, my friend...

[Lyn Anderson]

keeping myself honest. Thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good music and amazing poetry my Poet friend. Some people can create the wrong reaction. Best to keep safe distances and to keep you safe from doing something bad. A fun Monday poem. I liked it.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, I suppose that is best, thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Matching Socks]

Lol. :)
All the time darling, all the time!!
I would never of course but...

[Lyn Anderson]

of course, never, me neither:)