Eden

another inspiration from Ana Sophia http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1448524/

with you
I can be
undressed
but not feel
naked.

in the garden
before the shame
there was
perfect love --
sinless.

and in these
secret moments,
you are my
own private
Eden.

Author's Note

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is subtle but hot...a very sensual love poem, and i am right now looking for my fig leaf.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. Ana's lovely romantic writings have inspired me.

[NeiL ArandA]

Such lovely words KLG . That first stanza or paragraph really says more . For me it says . You can be too open to someone about anything without feeling too ashame or vulnerable . Here you can be really you without any pretension or hypocrisy . Just being honest and sincere . This piece reminded me of the writings of the wisest person . The Songs of Solomon . This is awesome KLG .

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, I really appreciate you taking the time.

[DoormanDan]

Eden is a wonderful name for this poem, and this poem is every bit as beautiful as the garden of Eden itself. Good job!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, I don't believe we have met. Nice to meet you.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. One of your best KL. Marvelous indeed...:)....................

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, so much, I appreciate it. Ana inspired me with her romantic writes.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:).....................