probably not what you think but maybe

probably not what you think but maybe

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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the cat came back another collection

"
His heart

his heart is in his eyes
you said
(you're right)
etched in the little lines
in all the spaces a man can smile.

and he gave it to me
honest and free
when he said, in his quiet way
I couldn't be how I am with you
if my heart wasn't in it.




momentary pauses

nestled inside the momentary pauses
in a hectic frenzy of all we have to do

me
and
you



solace in syncope

syncope stops breath
in mid flight
yet here
i find solace
you catch me
frozen
under the sun.


Scattered choruses
somehow find their groove
when I am with you.



© 2018 Lyn Anderson


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momentary pauses

nestled inside the momentary pauses
in a hectic frenzy of all we have to do

me
and
you

Yup, that. Another great collection of random musiness. Weill done.

(Yeah, I made that word up.)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

I like made up words. When they fit.:)
I love all of these, but I think the first one is my favorite because I feel like I can relate to it. These are all very beautiful, regardless. :) And thank you for being so kind to me.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Kindness should beget kindness, and you have been a calm and lovely presence here, and should not be.. read more
Brittany Zedalis

4 Years Ago

That's one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me on here. Thank you so much. ^-^
Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

I like to play with words, but I don't B.S. I believe it.
If you can find your groove with someone and he can melt the icicles on your skin (love the idea of being frozen under the sun), he is a keeper for sure. I find an honest romanticism in your words...a way of looking at love, lust, and romance that is unusual. Great stuff, KL. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I take that as a very nice compliment coming from such a romantic soul.
2things I think KL, 1) this was an amazing series of poems, they nestled nicely togeter as if it were all one poem, written as one... 2) and independent of your intentions, I found them romantic and loverly... I might even say (or think), KL, you just might be in love..

I know if I had written these, I would be in love... but then no one has ever accused me of being romantic or sane... go figure...

Cool poetry KL

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate the wonderful review. People have different definitions of love, being in lo.. read more
When you collect you connect, beautiful work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

I am honoured. Thank you.
Wow. What are you cooking these days KL??? Wonderful...:)....

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much for popping in.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................
Again a collection of such readable bite size pieces. Loved 'His Heart' and 'Scattered Choruses' most.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much.

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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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