lightweight when it comes to you

lightweight when it comes to you

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

when I heard this song

"

not like that


I want to
get this one
right
I want to
want you
always
in all
the ways
I wanted you
from the moment
my lips
touched yours
that is why
I don't want you
in ways
I had others
before.


resist me

oh baby

don't say
you don't
want to
see me
when it
isn't true
we both
know
it's just
dangerous --

so hot
that kiss
you can't
resist ..

just the thought

when just the thought

of that first kiss
makes me weak
in the knees --
who cares what
you call it,
just do that
to me
please.








© 2018 Lyn Anderson


Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5
wordswiz editing
empower your writing

Author's Note

Lyn Anderson

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

I'm old school. Slow and easy. Tempting and waiting make the final place sweeter. I enjoyed all the poetry. Thank you Lyn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

11 Months Ago

Such a pleasure to host you -- come on in and have a drink.:)
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

You are very kind.
For what my opinion is worth, you got this one right from the beginning till the very end, spot on..... Neville

Posted 11 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I truly appreciate you taking the time to stop and leave your thoughts
Neville Pettitt

11 Months Ago

my pleasure entirely....
I love the way each of these stanzas conveys a different kind of longing, some to be resisted, others not. I always love the way a somewhat tiny point is being made in each message . . . just barely touching upon a point, as reflected in the skinny typesetting style, a barely-there statement with deep meaning, & the reader is left knowing exactly what you mean.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. What a great review.
this is what I would call "a more weak kneed kisses please" poem.. yep, no excuses, don't stop just more please... but I suspect that the kisses you share are anything but "lightweight", I'd think more "dangerous", "intense" "all that and a bag of skittles"...

redzone

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

I think so, but, hey, what do I know ...:)
redzone

3 Years Ago

the weak knees are the give away... lol
i remember that "weak in the knees" thing...especially with a Certain first love...

"i don't want you in ways i had others before" Amen to that.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I am having real troubles with just this website right now -- was able to view poems.. read more

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

394 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 3, 2016
Last Updated on July 5, 2018
Tags: love, lightweight, hot, kiss, no one else

Love is an open book


Author

Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



About
I write under a pseudonym. I don't do Read Requests, but you can PM me if you want me to read something specific. I make friends with people who I read and interact with. I won't accept random reque.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Apathy Apathy

A Poem by Ana B.


Dynasty Dynasty

A Poem by Ana B.