inside your ache

a thought or two inside of me

I want to bury myself

inside your ache

and snuggle up next to

each and every pain ...

I want to kiss away those little lines

that settle between your brows

and smoothe out the edges

at the corners of your should be smile ...

I want to give you all of me

and take away the things 

that hurt you

if only for awhile ...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Cassie]

Wow!!!! This is so beautiful, would really make someones day especially some one hurting. I loved it

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you so much

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Lyn!
Lovely flowers, and what's not to adore about a "real" love poem, one about giving of one's caring heart to another unselfishly, without expectations in return … only that they let you.
"I want to give you all of me" … goodness!
And, what a smooth write with perfect line-breaks and tender imagery to touch the heart of the most hardened amongst us … whom with warm blood could help but adore you.

You just keep getting better … smiles 'n hugs! ⁓ Richard : )

Psst!
Check last word "a while" (ie: we'll be there in a while [soon]), as apposed to "awhile" for a short time.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for that, and the Grammarly remark.:)

[Richard🖌]

You're worth every stroke! ; )

[Jon Roggie]

Nice. Grow closer.
I still think of you as KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww thanks I miss you too

[LazerRays]

Awwwww. Right now I have those anime heart eyes. This is so cute and has melted my heart of stone. This is how I feel about this one person... They have all these pains and stuff and are so sad and convinced their life sucks. I really just want to admit I love them and I'm here for them but I can't..... So I just shut my mouth and say I'm their friend. Sigh. This is really beautiful and makes me smile because of how it applies so well to my life

[Lyn Anderson]

I am glad it made you smile

[barleygirl]

This is one of the most affectionate & endearing messages I've seen from you. I have to admit, sometimes I wish I'd known someone in my life who felt this way about me. It's the ultimate expression of caring (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

'should be smile' - I like that. Like someone intent on smiling but something or the other keeps them from it...
This piece shows such devotion. Some people are special just like that, that we want to do anything for them.
Heart touching write.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.

[Ana Papaya]

Wow, THIS is a beautiful love poem! :)

[Lyn Anderson]

oh thank you, that means a lot, coming from you

[Neville]

These words are so good & as I see it, so very necessary to get off your chest, like a tepid sponging for a loved one with a raging fever... still got my fingers crossed..

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much

[Delmar Cooper]

I like it, but it does sound like the audition essay for "Wife of the Year." If so, you get the tiara, the sash, the convertible and the all -expense paid cruise.

[Lyn Anderson]

I am all that and a bag of chips, and up until recently, a terrible judge of picking partners. :) nice to see you as always

[Paul Bell]

Think of a child in this poem
The pain and the helplessness you want to take from them.
A lot of pain in this write.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes. I was thinking of a lot of things. Thank you