the obstinate moon

the obstinate moon

A Poem by Lyn Anderson
"

a little ditty

"
the obstinate moon 
rests in sky so blue
can't help it baby,
it reminds of you --
smiling smugly
at the rising sun
attempting to
push through
the morning pink --

and wishing
you were here 
with me
to chase 
away
the day.

© 2018 Lyn Anderson



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dear Lyn... I have often seen the obstinate Moon in the morning... now I can relate in a poetic way ... it may be an Omen that it is a special day when you have guidance .. like a veil to shield you from the sun that burns. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Week Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Week Ago

What a lovely review. Thanks
love your closing ...let that obstinate moon win ..chase the day away ... just to be with "....you...." ;) smooth flowing word painting ... the emotion comfortable and the desire so relatable .. sometimes that moon hangs in there well into afternoon ... a thin veil ... but very present ... "The Obstinate Moon" will stay with me Lyn ..thanks for sharing
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Week Ago

Feel free to use the inspiration. Thank you
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

;) ......................
remembering someone and the magic that was shared, beautiful poetry

Posted 1 Week Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Week Ago

Thank you my friend. Lovely to have you over.
Ana Papaya

1 Week Ago

Welcome :)
I made many wishes to the moon. A wonderful story in the poetry. I believe many of us had talks to the moon. Thank you Lyn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Lyn Anderson

1 Week Ago

I have a bit of a fascination for the times of the year when the moon meets the sun. Thanks for indu.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome dear Lyn.
A wonderful fond, reminiscent, dreamy, romantic poem of love and yearning.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Week Ago

thank you for your thoughts

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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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