satin kisses in the clouds

not what you might expect

Once I lived in a corrugated castle

in a rainy kingdom

of lies ...

 

 

I spent a fair amount of my youth

walking on clouds..

Turned out I didn't like it too much,

Spent most my time

gasping for air

searching for substance

inside the words that didn't support me,

Left me flailing,

without a soft place to land --

 Instead I like the weight of you,

and my feet firmly on the ground

where I can hear the truth you speak

without making a sound.

 

Satin kisses into the night

Put your may inside my might

And never let me go ...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Cassie]

You really are a good writer.I enjoying every piece of poetry you have put down

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you so much

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I love that opening stanza! The poem is a mix of sad reflection and the contrast of feeling a deep connection and the safety of love's protection. As always written in flowing and emotionally meaningful language.

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you for stopping in.:)

[Lydia Shutter]

When you meet someone who can take away the pain....ah, that is special and that person is a keeper! "Put your may inside my might"....a great line! Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much. I appreciate it

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful words shared dear friend.
"Satin kisses into the night

Put your may inside my might

And never let me go …"
We do need those satin kisses. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Too kind. From a true romantic

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem and you are welcome dear poet.

[andrew mitchell]

Love is somewhat fairytale ish when caught up in the initial euphoria of feelings warm but when the clouds clear, the dust settles you see things for what they are and not to one’s liking. A lovely written piece, just wonderful.

[Lyn Anderson]

Very true when it isn't the real thing. But there's nothing like a good grounded and solid love.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes indeed.

[Neville]

Terribly good if you ask me.. you set the bar precariously high Lyn.... Neville

[Lyn Anderson]

Well thank you. I am honoured

[Neville]

because ya worth it..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, clouds dissipate...the make tears...they cannot be relied upon...we need solid ground upon which to build our dreams.
nice twist.
j.

[Lyn Anderson]

So very true. Thank you for your visits

[Ana Papaya]

Clouds are fluff and dissolve to quickly, one needs a solid foundation to build from.
This is wonderful

[Lyn Anderson]

Glad you like it. I sort of ran with your comments on my other blue thoughts … :)

[Ana Papaya]

Nice! :)
I'm going to have to dig deeper into your writing.
I've already read the next few in line. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

always enjoy a good dig. I miss our 3 way collabs with the turtle.:)

[Ana Papaya]

Me too. :)