Writer's Block

Acrostic

 

Where have all the words disappeared?

Rummaging through my head, I manage to find

Innumerable alphabets scattered randomly, but

That blank feeling nevertheless looming large

Empty pages still stare back pitifully

Robbed of confidence, I decide to give up;

Suddenly a few alphabets align

 

 

Before I have a chance to read what they've formed, the
Letters exchange places swiftly, and

Oh my goodness, what do I see?

Clever letters –all of them, have
Knitted themselves to mock me.

 

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

Oh haven't we all been here! First stanza, fantastic! Few things in the second that I noticed:

Before I have a chance to read what they�ve formed, the
Letters exchange places swiftly

I think you could drop the "the" at the end of the first line. It isn't really needed meaning-wise and it helps the flow when it is gone.

Clever letters �all of them, have
Knitted themselves to mock at me.


The "at" isn't needed here either and, upon reading, flows nicer without it being there.

Nice job.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A wonderful writing. Writer's block at it's best. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is really a great Acrostic written about WC and as writers most of us can relate themselves with it. Even I can highly relate myself with it because it often happens with me too :)

[Jason Henry]

oh, this is just awesome! loved that end. well, its a mocking you can enjoy 'cause you still got a very good write out of it. thanks for sharing!

[V. K. Harris]

I get this so often I just want to scream. Well written.

[Victoria Lee~]

I have had writer's block myself : ) Love this piece!

[Jaded Perception]

cute one! fun! i like it.

[A. L. Robinson]

Nice write!

[GraceKelly1974]

This is wonderful. Plus I cantotally relate...lol :o)

[A.L. James]

"Letters exchange places swiftly."
Me too. nice write.

[rachel D]

yes yes yes. i HATE writers block! you describe it well.