Empty Hours

Post break-up, time has stopped in its tracks.

Since we parted ways,

 

Everyday seems longer than

 

Twenty-four hours.

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

You know, time always stands still after any heartbreak.
People say that we realize the importance of any person only when we lost them, but that not true....We know their importance in our life, it's just like...we never thought that we could loose them!

[Rain]

Time does stand still, when the heart is heavy. Rain

[James Mayfield]

You have quite a talent with Japanese poetry. I really enjoyed this one. There is a deep honesty and familiarity to the piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Celtic Cat]

Ouch. An excellent punch in the gut. You purge feelings well.... great poem, powerful expression.

[Brette Medb]

The flow was good and the ache was felt. Nice work.


Brette

[Ladysue]

Caffeine, great little senrye. It speaks so much.

[Jessica]

how true... simple and heart-wrenching.

[Charlotte Marie]

Another one of your great poems! I like that they are so short but Totally to the point! Pure Genius! Thanks for another great read!!~CM~

[Lisa]

Man...
I feel that all the time.
This is a great senryu.

[Sarah Williams]

Nicely done...a great little senryu!

It is funny how when we're missing someone the days seem to drag by more slowly until finally realization hits and the healing begins....