Cure for Heartache

Cure for Heartache

A Poem by Imperfection
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You were so refreshingly different

You were almost too good to be true.

If I can convince myself to believe

In this piece of fiction,

I may be able to live through the remaining years

But would I be able to trust myself ever again?

© 2008 Imperfection


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wow. this is quite painful to read, I have sympathy for anyone in this situation. I been there and I know. Truly beautiful words, yet painful.

You were so refreshingly different

You were almost too good to be true.

If I can convince myself to believe

In this piece of fiction,

I may be able to live through the remaining years

But would I be able to trust myself ever again?

Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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"But would I be able to trust myself ever again?"

This line actually left me still, just still without even a thought or question..
And I know it is very difficult to express this feel through writing..
But this one is really remarkable!


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

All believe in love, and when vows are taken, all believe that they will be kept. Yet, love is so fickle..you have to trust, again. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The conversations with the mirror trouble us all I suppose. Especially when where searching for our muse.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Definite heartache woven through every line. I sincerely hope the writing is a catharsis for you. Your mind will try to play tricks and sometimes they work, but the memories are almost impossible to eradicate. They will peek out when the time is most inopportune. Hopefully by then, you will have learned to smile at the memories. Lydia

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A difficult time, a difficult write, maybe the words will make it easier. . .

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's hard and it is painful to pretend that someone you love never existed. This is such a sad write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh what a nice thing to know that others are sensitive, sometimes to sensitive but we are who we are. You are expressing yourself so well Caffeine Girly Girl!

This hits me: Wouldn't it be easier if I teach myself to fool me?

Yep, been there done that It does not work. Especially when you are so brutally honest. We that post our souls (hey that would be a great write) can not be fake or phony plastic.

You are so brave through the pain, this will heal your pains more so than any therapy, trust the expert in messed up relationships I know both sides. The Cafe has been the elixir for my soul. Far more than any counselor I have seen and seen them I have.

I hope more people get to see this. Peace Girl and hang in there. Hey I have a challenge for you I challenge you to write something super gooey sickening sweet and happy. This is a test and only a test. Peace -Roxy




Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In life looking back sometime only brings heartache...put Christ on and ask Him to give you someone you are about more than you did about this person.If you ae=re sincere and believe in Him..He will...I know personally..God bless Valentine

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and, with time, the distraction will prove to be habit, and the remembrances of him will only be as a dim, sad shadow. yes, i know.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, very painful. Seems like the only solution is to pretend it was all a dream. Worked for me. Pretend it was the best story/ movie you've ever seen/read and convince yourself it wasn't real. Writing about it is very good way of keeping the balance...
Sandra♥

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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