Addicted (Jorio)

Sometimes we cling to things because they contain a special memory that we think we cannot live without.

 

The smell of nicotine

Hangs around her faithfully

A remembrance of him,

She cannot let go.

 

                 ~

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"The smell of nicotine
Hangs around her faithfully
A remembrance of him,
She cannot let go."

Well, Jorio is one of my favourite forms of writing poems, as often there is a huge depth in four lined poetry�But on the same hand, writing a Jorio is a very tough job, because it is indeed very hard for anyone to describe a strong feel in just four lines! Your last Jorio "Invaluable" is still my favourite and will always be, because of its depth�
And this again is such a powerful poem� Here, the first two lines explains about her character and her inevitable loss which now forced her to live only with memories and smell of nicotine (which is the only faithful thing for her now), while the ending lines are acting more as a concluding section, explaining for the reason behind her present condition�for what she was (with him) and for what she is now (with only his memories)

So, overall it is a GREAT work, with such a beautiful yet sad emotion behind it�
You have really tried your level best to tell yourself that now he is gone, but though�He is still with you�His remembrance is still with you, which even you can't let go!


"Sooner or later in this world, everyone will break your heart and it is only for you to decide, who is more worth of�.the pain or the person!"

[Laura E. Aranda]

Jorio!
I love these! I want to try to make a few.....clever! I love the font and the picture you added to create depth!
Cheers,lea