Suburbs

Suburbs

A Poem by ali
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good news that came three weeks late.

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You are California.
Something we suburb kids dreamt about...
I love you.

But I know you're not real
You're just a state of mind. 

I've been here for too long.

And I kind of miss those suburbs. 

© 2011 ali


Author's Note

ali
this is actually not about the state. its about a boy. (shocker)

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I've dreamt of cali girls, but when I lived there I missed the sights of SLC, and yeah, I'm still talkin' about the girls...I don't know if you've heard it, but this reminded me of an old song by the Beach Boys called, "Salt Lake City."

Great Read!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 13 Years Ago


I would love to see someone think this is actually about the state.

California is a nice place to visit (or so I hear) when you want to escape.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Salt Lake City/ Moraga CA, UT



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