My Baby Girl

The overflow of emotion that I feel when I look at my sweet little angel

Tiny fingers,
Tiny toes,
Dark brown eyes,
And little nose.
The way you babble,
The way you sigh,
The way you laugh,
The way you cry.
When you giggle
And gaze at me;
When you smile
You make me see;
You're so pure.
You're so bright.
I'm blessed you're mine,
My sweet delight.
You wrap your hand
Around my thumb.
You make me melt
And come undone.
All the wonders
I have seen;
None compare
To you darling.
My precious baby,
Mommys' girl,
Forever sweetie,
You're my world

Author's Note

HELPFUL criticism please

Reviews

[Ana Nicole<33(:]

It reminds me of my sister

[Chris38]

It's beautiful and sweet. There's nothing to change. It's your emotions pouring out and don't dream of editing them.

[mikkiblueyes]

Love it....very poetic and beautiful

[D S Rollins]

Every line creates an image, and the rhythm and pace is wonderful. This is nice.

[littlelilypurplebride]

This is simply just beautiful children are blessings from God my baby is 10 so he isn't a wee baby any more enjoy them when they are so tinny like that.
god bless lily