Addison II.

What is hate, really?

I hate you.

I hate you. I hate me. I hate him, her; I hate this entire universe,

and I hate every galaxy,

dimension,

every organism in them.

I hate every planet, every world,

especially the one you live in.

I used to live in it, too...

I hate it. I always have.

And I hate everything in it,

everyone in it;

everything in everyone

in everything, with everything,

I hate.

I hate me. I hate looking at me, hearing me,

thinking about me,

and feeling things inside me.

I hate...

this feeling of hope

that there might be something I don't hate,

and I hate that hate I have

towards the hate I have...

I just want to stop hating, but...

I can't, 

because I hate that too.

Most of all, though,

I hate you.

 

Reviews

[Silvario]

wow. thats alot of hate :)

a very strong messege and one well penned. i loved the structure of this piece, very well put together with well placed emphasis to really give the poem more potency and rather strong emotional "sound".

very talented indeed. well done :)