I LOVE HIM IT HURTS...

she keeps lamenting...

I love Him it hurts……

Oh gosh!

I love him so much that it hurts!

Yet I cannot tell him!

My heart is bleeding on the inside.

His laughter, he voice,

The soothing sound it brings me.

N oh! Our fights!

The best thing that ever happens to me

Why can't I just let it all out?.

For I fear to lose him

Yet someone else wants me so bad

Why does this have to happen?

He has always been the twin brother I never had!

And he has always seen me as a sister!

I even gave him a pet name

That he has been ever so used to

He would never complain like others would

Yet all I can do is coping!

Oh why does it have to be like this?

I have to act like am feeling best

While in my heart of hearts,

I feel the worst

Maybe i am overreacting

But then time will tell

I hope to get over him soon

So I can also await a new moon

And probably get new friends too

But then I am so helpless

Now i even want to hate myself

I love u so much that it hurts....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Reading through your lines left my eyes wet and heart sad. A great write from the poet of NANA.... Thanks a lot for sharing it

[Amy]

Thank you so much for reading. :)

[ayosonolowo]

Nice poem, weldone, i really like it..

[Amy]

Thank you.

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcom

[Karen]

There is always pain in love, in some way or another, and the painful love expressed in this piece palpitates with feeling and emotion, even for the reader! Thank you for writing and sharing!

[Amy]

thank you too for reading. :)

[one sky]

Full of sadness... I can feel the pain you are bearing right now. But you have to stand still. Time can heal any wound. Keep moving.

[SyberRose]

a sad write...hopefully time will heal your wounds...Rose

[Amy]

Thank you Rose. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"My heart is bleeding on the inside.

His laughter, he voice,

The soothing sound it brings me.

N oh! Our fights!

The best thing that ever happens to me"
I feel the bittersweet love in this great write along with the hope of the future...Well penned...:)

[Amy]

Thank you Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)