Angel's Anger

                                     

Take a left turn into an angel’s anger

And see her internal secrets fighting.

Her slanted perception of modern Utopia

Needs an injection of potent motivation.

Puddles of perfection cross her journey

Only to be glided over and left behind.

Drifting silently into her broken words

Is the only salvation for an angel’s anger. 

The sense of coming close to the edge

Leaves a pleasurable taste in her mouth.

Boosts of hard pain from bottled venom 

Protects her center of gravity from melting.

Reviews

[Kailani]

Amazing write. It is deep and touching. The first time I read it, I was still lingering on the surface of meaning and emotion in the poem, but the second time I read it I could slip between the lines and feel the emotion and meaning laced through this work.

I have no suggestions nor complaints or tips for this poem.

I also wanted to tell you that I think this work is far past being good enough to publish. This is one of the best pieces of work that I have read so far, and it's definitely going into my collection!

Once again, amazing write.

Keep up the wonderful work!

~Kailani