Out of Time

Desire nailed into the thick air,
lustrous eyes, delicately rounded,
Watching her straw get distorted in the glass,
Just as if it would.
The hungry heart is a ravenous beast,
Calling to be fed and yet, not misunderstood. 
Music painted onto silence,
Another pair of eyes she see's,
Awaiting the modulation of spring.
Hearts beating, distance and length intertwined,
At precisely the wrong moment.

Reviews

[PhoeniX]

so expressionate. good job

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

fantastic piece of writing

[Phill Oz O'fee]

This is a fantastic piece to explore. The imagery created takes the reader on a journey of the heart craving a gratification of self wants and aspirations. But alas, the hopes and dreams are unfulfilled, as present circumstances reveal a missed opportunity - as you put it - Out of Time!

Star write!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee