Kingdom of Desire

Being a lost soul

In the bleak desert

looking for water and seeking thirst

Here I come to save you

Here I come to breath your spirit into me

Just so one day

We can hold our hearts

And sway

In the garden of heaven

In the everlasting bliss

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

It's a great Rhyming poem. Liked this piece and enjoyed this too much. I wanted to read more on it.... i want to see what happen further more... if i'd a suggestion then i'd say, keep write more on it. Continue it. Very bright pic. you've shown me by your few words. You've shown me the Reality... of everyone's heart.
The ending's awesome and damn nicely ended with your nice words. Keep posting more stuffs.

[Angel Bella]

Welcome anytime. And thank you for your time.

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
I liked the write, I mused it before my fire. I never had thought of heaven being a garden before, I’ve always thought it as a wonderful snow covered tundra. You cause me to wonder, well done.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Angel Bella]

Thanks for your kind comment!

[Rahul]

Nicely penned, font's clear too to read.

[Angel Bella]

Thank You.

[Leonard Birch]

Beautifull written my friend. Would love to read more of your works. Keep up the good work.
Leo

[Angel Bella]

Thanks and Welcome.

[sivan]

lovely arrangement. reminds me of a quote>>> " beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing there is a field; i will wait for you there."

[Angel Bella]

Thanks for your comment and welcome.