Please

                  I never wanted you to leave

                  So please

                  Come back to me

             

                 You were all I wanted but you

                  Turned away

                  Can you please stay?

 

                  One little lie

                  And I

                  Die because your gone

 

                  Everymove is a tear

                  And I start to scream

                  Please don't leave

 

          But you don't hear me....

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

Aww. The flow in this is good and you capture the emotion well. Great write!

[Derek Cummings]

Short, but smart and sometimes that's all it takes for one to make a point and express him or her self. You had my attention the whole time. Good job!

[Dream Eater]

i love it so special in its own way

[Daniel Amicucci]

I love it :)

[wolfgirl]

that is so moving

[Raven Starhawk]

To me it relates to feelings of being abandoned of which I can greatly relate to. This was very well penned.

[K-mo]

this is a great poem, very heartfelt

[xfallen5oldierx]

This is a moving piece. There was a spacing problem, everymove should be spaced. Other than that great piece. Keep Writing!