Live Until You Can't

This is a poem more on looking more positively on life...and not taking any moment for granted.

Open your eyes to make life matter

Leave your mark

Save the world

Live your life and your dreams

Dance until you can't

Sing until you can't 

Realize that everyday is one second closer to the end of your song.

Capture the spark that fell from the sun

And savor the rain on your face.

Make every word matter

And every look special.

Dance until you can't

Sing until you can't

Realize that everyday is one second closer to the end of your song.

Take heart every sound

And record it to play on the rainy days.

Remember each magical feeling as the song fades away.

Each note in a song

Each word in the verse.

Because every second counts.

Dance until you can't 

Sing until you can't

Realize that everyday is one second closer to the end of your song.

Don't be surprised when the silence overtakes your world.

Live until you can't.

Reviews

[SwEet PeA]

Hi,

You have done it. I'm usually the sickly perky one in the room, but My reflex to this is to rip off a cute stuffed animals head and throw it at you!

Which is good! it reminds me that I have many parts of me that still needs evolving!!
;-)
~SwEeT

[Raperle]

Realize that everyday is one second closer to the end of your song
love that line coz it describes how every wasted minute never comes back, describing a very deep meaning but yet with simple words...chapeau !

[Truth_About_Rain]

Love it, it's so meaningful :)

[Daydreamer54]

I love the three repeaTING STANZAS! tHEY R SO POETIC AND MEANINGFUL! tHIS POEM REMINDS ME OF THE SONG "oNE DAY TOO LATE" by skillet! Great write! ^^

[Josefin]

Very beautiful and so true :) a very inspirational poem that I liked a lot! keep writing :)

[Midori]

I like it a lot and I really think it is one of the best poems that you have written yet!!!:)

[J.A.Bentley]

My favorite poem so far, hands down.
"Capture the spark that fell from the sun" brilliant imagery! Great work Vic