Welcome To My Life

Welcome To My Life

A Chapter by Rose
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This is a poem I wrote thinking and wishing of how my life could be where you would just get everything you want

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Love at first sight
It grows,
Like a huge tropical plant
It grows attaching itself to you
It grows out standing green leafs
It gets you stuck
Its stem thin, like a rope
But its strong and ties on to you
You can not move
As I want you to be still
Not move from my sight
As this is the truth
The truth, my stranger
Of love at first sight

My mind remebers
Everything from the beginning to the end
Of everything you do
Like a computer
It can not delete you
Your stuck inside my mind
Your a program that affects my computer
My computer can not work
Without you, it will break down
If I lose you
My computer will be at risk of a virus

I want to be a magnet
A magnet that brings you to me
As every person I have met
Like you in every way
Is metal to me
And your the only type of metal I want
I'm sure, you will get stuck to me
The force of my magnet so powerful
You will get dragged, from where you are
Nothing can hold you
If so, it will get dragged too
As nothing can make this force stop
This magnet is me being myself
I will not stop this force

I want to be with you,
So close,
Every second of my life
If I spot you
I can't stop thinking about you
My dreams are not far from coming true
I will marry you one day
Today or tomorrow
Or whenever

I have saved all my love
Like saving up money
I dig and dig for gold
I have been digging all my life,
I have found most gold
But I am missing one
I am missing you
Your the most precious,
The most biggest,
And the most wanted
Gold in the universe

When I find you
After waiting so long
I will say welcome to my life
And you can see what I have done




© 2012 Rose



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Ah.. another one about love from your pen. It is soft, and melodious, and reflects your state of mind. Well done!

You have to replace "your" with "you're", though.

Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Um, you keep using "your" where "you're" is supposed to go. Other than that, this piece reminds me of how hard I want to work so that if I find that one true love, I could show hym what I have done. Wonderful poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You have a great talent love of seeing the world with clarity from someone else's view you know! That is great!
A wonderful poem that shows the grazes of experiencing life:) Good things will come hon, in time:)
xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is amazing. I absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is so awesome and i lvoe it keeeeep it up and awesome work

Posted 7 Years Ago


First of all, great personification you used in there. I always love a poem stuffed in with lost of figures of speech and yet carefully managed. This is one such poems.

"I have saved all my love
Like saving up money
I dig and dig for gold"

Words perfectly reflecting what you supposed to mean. It's the trait of a genuine poet.

But since I've read some of your poems, I wanna tell you something - - Try not to write so much about Love.. Try nature, or Darkness instead. Take love on a normal basis. It's Bad for the health.. lol.

"When I find you
After waiting so long
I will say welcome to my life
And you can see what I have done"

Perfect ending to a perfect poem. For the sake of the written word, please don't stop writing poems. :) Kudos.

Posted 7 Years Ago


aaawweeesssommmeetastic write. (=

Posted 7 Years Ago


wow. this was great. personally, when i saw the title i thought of the simple plan song with the same name. lol. this is really sweet work, definitely touching, and that first stanza's the best in my opinion. great job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aw, this was so swet! i like it! great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This has tons of potential. Keep it up!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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