Clown

Clown

A Chapter by Rose
"

Sometimes it cheers me up to cheer someone else up

"

Why are you upset, clown?

 

I think you’re funny

Let me put an end

To all your worries

  

At every minute

And every second

Of my life

I smile and laugh at you

It makes me love you

With all my heart,

I'm so happy

And proud that I have met you,

 

Your jokes are so funny

Listening to them

Makes me laugh and choke

 

I admire your colourful costume,

Your make-up is so stunning,

 

You make me feel,

I should go to a party

So you can hold my hand,

And take me to the dance floor

 

You don't need to command and demand,

I will go to the wild party

 

You have welcomed

Laughter into my life

I thank you so much for it

 

You’re unforgettable,

I will love you,

And treat you always,

 

 

 




© 2012 Rose



Author's Note

Rose
This is my conversation with my clown. I have now turned it into a poem. Enjoy and please try to imagine this as a conversation between me and the clown

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This instantly drew me because of the title and because I feel like a clown for taking myself seriously. Your clown reminds me how the trick is to give something to another not to set out to win. The giving is the most important part. If we learn that, we might if we are very, very lucky, also win. But is winning so important? 'You make me feel' is my fave line. To set out with that as the goal seems the best way for any artist to be. Bravo, clown!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was beautiful. It captures humor and good tidings in a soft and smooth word form. I can see the laughter invoked and the positive air that comes from cheering up one who's is of the upsidedown frown.

Very Creative and heartfelt ink!

Wolfie

Posted 7 Years Ago


an outstanding poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


I enjoyed the mix of child-like adoration combined with the adult definition of love and how well it played into this read. It led me down a mental trail of fascination and wonder about just who the clown is and what role they play, or whether they are just a clown and the world through a child's eyes.

Posted 7 Years Ago


when i think of clowns i think of Pennywise from Stephen King's "It" and various other murdering no goods DRESSED as clowns!! ha ha This was a refreshing change from what my mind usuallythinks of clowns...kudos for bringing the fun and sweetness back :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love it you did a great job got to read this

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very interesting poem. Love your style of writing. Quite funny. It si quite hard to construc a valide conversation in the form of a poem, but you succeed. Really good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lol this is an awesome poem! Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Believe it or not, alot of people fear clowns..
I am not one of them, This is an awesome write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clown is a person who makes us laugh, but sometimes we forget that he too has got feelings and tease them, this poem shows how kind you are and respect their inner feelings... good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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