Meet Again

Love takes over all humans

I saw you standing next to a bar

I saw you driving your car

I saw you on magazine covers

The thought of you

 

Makes me see lovers

 

My eyes widen

My mouth drops

My mind feels dreamy

I reach out a photo

 

A memory of you

 

A flash that left you in surprise

You didn't think I would hide

But I was desperate

To have you in my hands

 

As a picture at least

 

Every moment alone

I start dreaming of you

I feel so much excitement

Of sending you my number

 

I make you smile by calling you when I get home

 

If our eyes meet again

That's when I will have my chance

I want to meet you tomorrow

So don't be late

 

Or I'll be waiting for you to come at eight

 

At my home

We will share a bottle

I will cook for you

But please come

 

You can guess how much I need you

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I know the feeling as well..and I wish sometimes that this feeling would go away, but sometimes this feeling can't. The poem as a whole was very well written. Thanks for sharing. :)

[H. A. M.]

"I saw you standing next to a bar
I saw you driving your car
I saw you on magazine covers
The thought of you

Makes me see lovers"

I had to read this twice because at first I thought "okay she's stalking him". But I had to remember when I used to think of someone like that and thought I saw them everywhere. Good one! I enjoyed the way you drew this out. The person being adored doesn't have a clue and I'm allowed to look into the mind of the pursuer. This works for me. KUDOS TO YOU!.

[HorrorMaster]

I know the feeling. I feel the same way too. Very good poem.

[ShaneBerry]

i know this feeling, deep, and impacting, a woman i felt this way for b etryaed me, we spent five years living together, then she left with a man she had known for two month, to get married....

[Andrew Wright/Darkness2..]

I've felt that need, and I think you've portrayed it perfectly here. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

[~Z]

This makes me feel sad.

[Daniel Gardner]

this is nice. very creative and well written. leaves you wondering what will happen next in the story

[Brutality's Sake]

I've never actually planned for a date to be at my house, one of those romantic evenings that are surrounded by candlelight, smell like home made dinner and taste like wine (probably because I'm only 16) but this piece painted such a vivid picture with the imagery you use, and the emotions you portray so well that I feel like I'm waiting for my date. Beautiful work.
-Cathrine

[Black Cat Fever]

Will he or will he not come? That's the desperate question being asked here. Very well written.

[Erin]

Your style and pattern are excellent. It has the style of a poem, the pattern of a song. Nice nice indeed. Tone of hopeful depression is probably the best thing about this poem. Great job.
PBP