Writing To You

I wrote this listening to Yellowcard- ocean avenue

There are many secrets

I have shared with you

Of course they are so true

I hope they are safe with you

I want to live my life

Walk through it

With no trouble

And plenty of places to hide

 

We are both young

So alike

You make me feel

So happy all night

 

Talking all day

Saying things

What we shouldn't like to say

But thats who we are

We are driven

We are pretty much mad

 

We talk of lots of things

Learn things

What we really don't need

But I'd twist everything around

To surprise you when your down

 

We both pretend

It never makes us look bad

Having fun is what its all about

Every night is an adventure

I talk to you which makes me glad

 

 

Oh please don't leave now

Our lives would never be the same

It's not imaginable

I can't see you leaving me

 

Run from our problems

Just try and make things better

Your never alone now

Not talking to you

Is something I will never be able to do

 

Reviews

[James Maines]

Excellent. I felt the emotion flowing through the poem... keep up the good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Felt like a conversation that become more needed with each line. Secrets can hold people together. But we need adventure and dreams to escape the world. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote