Born to shine

Born to shine

A Poem by angelina neves
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�The universe is a mirror that reflects to us what we are�- Carl Jung

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Born to feel the winds

To hear the rain

To play with fire

To paint, think, write

We don’t need to be trapped

In a self tortured prison

Inside a squeezed heart

Chained with endless orders

Targets, marks, definitions…

Before being anything else

We are children of the universe

 

Born to be free

Not to be afraid of liberty

Depending on definitions

On others preconceptions

On money,

Status,

Power

Or drugs,

Guns and orders

Coming from above!

 

Born to shine

Don’t blow out the flame

The fuel of life

No matter the obstacles

No matter the challenges

Think, reflect

Share your internal light

Play and laugh

Opening your arms

Embrace the entire world

Explode with passion

Into emotions of love!

 

Born to be alive

Through out our entire being

Physical, mind, soul

Gallop like an untamed horse

Wild as a comet crossing the sky

Moving beyond dreams

Growing, expanding

Into beautiful feelings!

Have the courage

Take the responsibility

To be different, unique

Assuming the adventure

To be as wild as all nature

Embrace the liberty

That will make you shine

Like any other star

Scintillating in the night!

© 2008 angelina neves


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A beautifully penned piece. You do have a way with words. Well done Poet well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


the imagery of splendor, your words cut staright to the heart of the vision, i love the highly
descriptive terms you use, as the reader can feel the emotions you are conveying at height,
you have such a way with words and thought, as poetry justifies your imagination,
a breathtaking look into the stars of knowledge, beautifully invented.

Posted 16 Years Ago


And you, dear Angi, were born to spread sunshine on our days, and bring us your beautiful words that ring with the spirit of freedom and light. And I'm going to celebrate the day of your birth, because that's the day God smiled down on us and brought us such a beautiful spirit filled with love and wisdom.

Big hugs...
Jeri



Posted 16 Years Ago


this is beautiful. richly constructed a sophisticated text. love it. fantastic. this will convince all disbelievers. i love it. but why ....not many know this?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful poem filled with vivid imagery~WelL DonE!~Fran~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Targets, marks, definitions� "

Sometimes, it feels as if that is all we are. At least, to ourselves.

We should be the last to buy into our own self image.

Nice piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much beautiful imagery in this write!! I was going to go back and pick a favorite line, but I dono't think I could pick just one!! It's great to read your words again!!

Hugs!

:-)Heather

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great message. Empowering piece. My favorite line:

" Before being anything else
We are children of the universe"

very deep in its meaning.


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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