Happiness

Happiness

It's the twilight or the dawn or the dusk

It flickers and then it is lost in the toil of day to day

It is the trembling light of a distant star

vague light not letting itself be grasped

It is the flashing of the firefly light

shudders and disappears in the hustle and bustle of living

Is the blink of the light of a candle

Hesitant, it warms inside without being noticed

Reviews

[Kanupriya kashyap]

As I get a chance to return the favour for liking my poem ..I find your this writing ..It so nice and simple..You have nicely described that happiness is somewhere lost in our day to day life......We need to find it......

[angelina neves]

thank you for reading and giving me a lovely feedback

[Coyote Poetry]

We need to enjoy our life and know happiness. I liked how you used the description. You made the reader understand your desire. Thank you Angelina for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[angelina neves]

thank you very much for reading and commenting!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Angelina.

[Katerina Grev]

I like all the different comparisons. I think it shows how happiness comes from a lot of different things and people can have happiness from a variety of things and that what happiness means to one person, it might not mean the same to someone else. I also like how descriptive your writing is. Really good work, keep writing!

[angelina neves]

thank you very much for reading and giving your thoughts