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A Poem by angelina neves
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Albert's cafe challenge "I PUT IT INTO MY LEFT HAND TOP POCKET AND RAN THRU THE VINEYARD"

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In fulfilling the propose of life

 

Posing in naked truth

Undress the fears

To speak your mind

            Regardless of what other think

 

Invented new ways to see

Taking all whish for love

            From the top pocket, the mind

 

Inside the head a play with wonder

Narcissus growing

To cover with the beauty deserve

On top of all refuse forever

               To do as you are told...

 

MY LEFT HAND shows the way

            Followed by creation of the right hand

 

Traveling in invented personal forests

Omnipresent with planted desires

Permanently smiling dreams

 

Passions flying inside out with out sins

Overflowing with delights paintings

Cover with sounding colors

Keep making unique waves

Electric footsteps propose to rise

Through out all prisons to the sun shine

 

AND RAN, reviving the true self

 

Trembling in each cell

Heart, veins

Rising above head neurons

Universality is conquered  

 

Temptation fulfilled

Hell disappears washed away by rains

Everything is just in the right place

            As it is supposed to be: naturally free!

 

Victory of the self is the victory of all

Inventing fearless ways of being

New life with out taboos

Everlasting propose of all creation

You, I, we, as all amazing nature

Abel to run free

Radiant, brilliant

Divinities naturally born

            As it should be: unique!

© 2008 angelina neves


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And you do have a mind of your own Angie...a very unique mind. Fascinating the thought you put into the content of this write to make it all come out so perfectly. I doubt there is a form you can't master. Well done Angie.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow Angie, what a fantastic acrostic you have written with your talented
pen. Each stanza opened up thoughts and visions for me as I was swept
along on a tide of wonderment of your unique and creative mind!

I thoroughly enjoyed the concept and the meaning of this, your amazing
and free way of looking at nature and life is stunning!

Thank you for submitting this to Keeping the Dream Alive contest!

Helena :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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